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all pretty good,i lioke the G.I. JOES,but would change "the movie" into italics(the same as gi joe-an american heo above it)and the only other thing is the will smith collection...2 of the films have follow ups-so i would have picked 3 singular films like i-robot/independance day/enemy of the state.
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MrHenryDog wrote:
QUOTE(MrHenryDog @ Jul 11 2006, 06:17 AM)
the only other thing is the will smith collection...2 of the films have follow ups-so i would have picked 3 singular films like i-robot/independance day/enemy of the state.


That is a 5 disc collection set has both Bad Boys 1&2, as well as MIB 1&2
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ashamed.gif SORRY
didn't have my glasses on,and was just looking at the thumbnail on the back cover.
good work tho cheers.gif
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Mighty fine work
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I like the Will Smith collection one. I think by putting I-Robot in the centre it would have created a better balance for your screenshots. The corner indentation on Bad Boys is also a different size to the other two.

I like your first Click cover. Your second one, the screenshots look disjointed. I'd also consider adding "credits" to that one. I don't think the first one needs them though.

My Super Ex-Girlfriend looks nice. You haven't centered the credits though & they look like they might actually have some missing of the edge of the page. You also need to get rid of that last line. Perhaps by putting more on the first line, or by leaving something out. I'm not a fan of empty Special Features blocks. IMO either fake/guestimate them or don't include them otherwise the cover is unprintable unless the user enters the details themselves.

Your labels look fine.

I only looked at your posted covers, not the links.

Good luck with your bid for contributor status.

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swampdogk wrote:
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I like your first Click cover. Your second one, the screenshots look disjointed.

What do you mean by disjointed?

My Super Ex-Girlfriend looks nice. You haven't centered the credits though & they look like they might actually have some missing of the edge of the page. You also need to get rid of that last line. Perhaps by putting more on the first line, or by leaving something out.


I fixed the credits and took out the SPECIAL FEATURES
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"user_name" wrote:What do you mean by disjointed?


The 2 screenshots on the left are in close proximity. The top one is almost touching the text. In contrast there is a large gap surrounding the one of the right & also large gap above & below the logo's.

3/4 of the cover is tightly packed making the 1/4 which is widely spaced look like it doesn't belong there.

Hope that explains it better.

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ps. I would have faked the special features rather than replacing it with the screenshots. I think the special feature box looked good. Just to clarify, the special features comment was marked IMO (in my opinion) Others may like an empty box to fill in later. I just can't see the point.
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