Rise of the Planet of the Apes

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WOW, couple of little tweaks I guess from what ford mentioned but I'm loving this buddy! Colours on the back there are brilliant to me :) Way to go my friend!
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I think it is a great start but needs some adjustment. (You probably know)
The complete scene is in “peace” if you know what I mean. Nobody is frightened for the apes, they all do their thing. (Nobody is looking to the apes)
For my believing the apes are too big on the buildings. Especially those on the right.
I think I know which picture you used for the apes. You can see on that picture that the apes are much smaller in perspective than in your picture.
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I think they just found some crates to stand on :whistle: If they're made any smaller they will be hard to see IMO.
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Stringelax wrote:
QUOTE (Stringelax @ Dec 15 2011, 02:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think it is a great start but needs some adjustment. (You probably know)
The complete scene is in “peace” if you know what I mean. Nobody is frightened for the apes, they all do their thing. (Nobody is looking to the apes)
For my believing the apes are too big on the buildings. Especially those on the right.
I think I know which picture you used for the apes. You can see on that picture that the apes are much smaller in perspective than in your picture.


Your right m8,

I made them about 20% smaller, better?
Added some police officers that watches to the direction of the apes and made some officers look towards the apes by rotating there heads :) .
Realy want to clone some other officers out and replace them with officers that are watching
to the sky to the other monkeys as well but couldn't find some pics yet.
also added some more monkeys


JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Dec 15 2011, 10:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think they just found some crates to stand on :whistle: If they're made any smaller they will be hard to see IMO.


lol :)

@ ford I wanted to put some screens in but there's not so much space.
Will think what i can put in the right upper corner below the synopsis.

Any idea's :)
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Lovin the back!
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Lovin the back!

:agree:

Perhaps add some lens flare to the lights?
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Beautiful work wes!
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What if you moved the larger helicopter (if it is a separate layer) to that open space pointing it's light at the ape at the top of the big building? Then maybe the quote could be moved or removed to make space for screens?
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It's a seperate layer Ford but i realy like the light on the quote :)
I think you maybe right it's a perfect way to put some srcreens in, will think about it ;)

thnx guys!!
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I don't think you need screens bud
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