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I think this is a great concept for the movie, will fit well.

What if you made it that the front is the cover of the dossier with a tab on the top left, and the back is like the inside of it? Then you can put all sorts of images and papers on the back with the contents of the movie info.

Also, might look cool to have a small picture held onto the front of the dossier with a paper clip.

Just some ideas.

Keep it up dude!
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jwshaw89 wrote:
QUOTE (jwshaw89 @ Dec 8 2011, 12:14 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Assuming that's a coffee cup stain in the bottom right, I think it's needs to be a little larger so it's more in perspective with the dossier.

Otherwise, nice start! :)


Your assumption is right, i'll get a bigger cup.


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QUOTE (bpmford @ Dec 8 2011, 02:58 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think this is a great concept for the movie, will fit well.

What if you made it that the front is the cover of the dossier with a tab on the top left, and the back is like the inside of it? Then you can put all sorts of images and papers on the back with the contents of the movie info.

Also, might look cool to have a small picture held onto the front of the dossier with a paper clip.

Just some ideas.

Keep it up dude!


Had a similar idea with all sorts of images on the back, but am not sure yet how to incorporate that with the spine (yet), i'll figure it out somehow.
Like the idea about a small pic. on the front, let me get my camera ... :)
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nice concept, looking good!
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nice concept buddy :)
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Small update, made the coffee stain a bit bigger, and found a pic. somewhere between the secret files, will try to add some rust to the paperclip, to give it that nice old look. Moving on to back and spine next.
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Cool buddy! Looks good... Perhaps adding a bit of that yellowish colour from the pic to the portfolio will make it pop more.

Look forward to seeing the back tied in!
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I agree with above mate, but I think the pic could use a tad more yellowing and fading for the age effect
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As you would see, still working a little on the front, to make it a little more "pop". (Suggested by the 2 guys above this post, tnx ;) )
Think this is pretty on the spot, tried to put a little more "aging" on the front, for that nice old "locked in a secret damp basement" look (don't know if the "yellow-spots" are to much, it's the best i can do). Still need to add some rust to the paperclip (to-do list). Update soon, with something ......
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try a small pen doodle of a rocket blasting off to the moon drawn on it as it will make it more real as we have all done something like it on a school or colledge folder
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coming along nicely
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