LittleCoolDude wrote:QUOTE (LittleCoolDude @ Nov 22 2011, 10:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>it looks good, but the TT is really hard to read, have you tried a different colour b/c its getting lost in the sky right now.Dagon wrote:QUOTE (Dagon @ Nov 22 2011, 10:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>about the title and sky. It's looking good and coming together nice. A small thing though, can you drop the font size on the comma after Tom Hanks a size or size half... looks almost as large as the letters
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Thanks for your replies, guys - and thank you for affirming me in my own doubt about the TT. Thought about going with a black one, but don't know. Any ideas?A designer knows he has achieved perfection - not when there's nothing left to add - but when there's nothing left to take away
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wessim wrote:QUOTE (wessim @ Nov 22 2011, 11:09 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Voted for the second version, Excellent cover bro!!
My own fav as well, altho levels/contrast/brilliance could do with a boost.Also need a good idea for the TT color.
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venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Nov 23 2011, 03:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>the 2nd version work better with the back cover and looks more natural![]()
If you adjust the back with a more blue ocean and a more blue sky, the first version looks better.
It depends on personal taste, but if you talk about natural, i thought normally water colors blue for our eyes and not a mix between brown and blue. Same for the air.
But integrating brown into this design gives this design a more Pacific (WWII) look. So at the end i will pick version two.
Anyway, nice design job Jolly!
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And an update.... New TT, text fixed. I really hate working with that font - all spaces, commas and so on are overlarge when typing. So I've had to go back, find each space and whatnot and make them pt 1 - 1 1/2 pts smaller than letters.
And of course I had to adjust each letters' size to decrease an/or fix the space in between the letters
themselves. Always mix up kerning and leading, but you know what I mean
Apart from the BD25s I'm working on, I think perhaps that it's a definate possibility that this perhaps, as in maybe is the final version. Or not! :chin:
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And of course I had to adjust each letters' size to decrease an/or fix the space in between the letters
themselves. Always mix up kerning and leading, but you know what I mean
Apart from the BD25s I'm working on, I think perhaps that it's a definate possibility that this perhaps, as in maybe is the final version. Or not! :chin:
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about the title and sky. It's looking good and coming together nice. A small thing though, can you drop the font size on the comma after Tom Hanks a size or size half... looks almost as large as the letters

Also need a good idea for the TT color.