The Pacific

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:09 am

Always wanted to do a cover for this series, so here goes. :arms:

Still just toying with the scene. Will cutout, adjust images and so on and so forth later on.

What do you think? Worth pursuing?

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wessim · Post by **wessim** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:24 am

I like this setup, cool start bro

Arkflip · Post by **Arkflip** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:05 pm

Cool layout so far, let us an update

Sxxo · Post by **Sxxo** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:49 pm

Cool start JR.

A little more blue perhaps ...

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:41 pm

Very nice start. Doesn't need a comma after Steven Spielberg

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 7:05 pm

Thx guys - will post an update soon - completely forgot to ask - with this custom TT - or should I go with the original?

Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Nov 18 2011, 07:41 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Very nice start. Doesn't need a comma after Steven Spielberg

...copied from the retail box.. Where's an English teacher when you need one?? :chin:

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jwshaw89 · Post by **jwshaw89** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:27 pm

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Nov 18 2011, 07:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thx guys - will post an update soon - completely forgot to ask - with this custom TT - or should I go with the original?

...copied from the retail box.. Where's an English teacher when you need one?? :chin:

With or without a comma is acceptable. In British English, we tend not to put a comma before 'and', but in American English a comma is generally used (as in the retail box.) The reason Americans put a comma in is to clearly denote the separate parts of a list. So either is fine.

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:33 pm

Thx for clearing that up jw :cheers:

Here's an update. Still have to finish off the bombardment of the beach; i.e. more water splashes and some smoke/debris/body parts.... - nah, will leave out that last one.

Comments, suggestions, please?

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wessim · Post by **wessim** » Fri Nov 18, 2011 9:44 pm

maybe add a touch of color in the sky. Otherwise very nice work Jr

Segunda · Post by **Segunda** » Sat Nov 19, 2011 1:20 am

In my opinion, it doesnt look real to me. The size of the little boats do not match the size of the large boat in front and the distance between the large boat and the beach. They need to be larger to get everything in the right perspective.

Your start is nice and its hard to fix

Cheers buddy

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