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:agree:


Edit: that would have worked better on the first side...
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I think the TT is hanging too low. Perhaps move it up some? Otherwise nice work :thumb:
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M0vieM0nster wrote:
QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Nov 3 2011, 09:52 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks Good :D

Thanks MM

Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Nov 3 2011, 09:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
:agree:

Edit: that would have worked better on the first side...

and yes Zungam, would have looked better on the first side ;)

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Nov 3 2011, 10:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think the TT is hanging too low. Perhaps move it up some? Otherwise nice work :thumb:


Also moved the TT up a bit, on special request :)
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Not sure if it's just the preview but there seems to be a green dot in the orange sun thing.

On the back have the special features got a gradient on them or are they below the green mist as they seem to turn green.

I'm not too sure about the yellow box/line around the screens. Maybe change it to green and only have it around the screens? Also maybe try having the opposite end cut of as well?
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sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Nov 4 2011, 12:08 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not sure if it's just the preview but there seems to be a green dot in the orange sun thing.

On the back have the special features got a gradient on them or are they below the green mist as they seem to turn green.

I'm not too sure about the yellow box/line around the screens. Maybe change it to green and only have it around the screens? Also maybe try having the opposite end cut of as well?


Now you can be sure, there is indeed a green dot in de orange sun thing, will be removed (good eyes b.t.w.)

I know what mean with the SF, and i'm not that knowledgeable with PS so i don't know how ..., but it happend by accident, but i liked it.

On the last part i'm willing to try green around the screens, but there is already so much green, and there is the yellow/orange thing on the front, so i decided to do that on the back to.

Did you mean by "Also maybe try having the opposite end cut of as well?" ...cut the bottom picture as i cut the top one..?
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

I think he meant the main line accross the back? On the left it stops just before the edge of the cover where as on the right it goes to the edge ;)
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M0vieM0nster wrote:
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I think he meant the main line accross the back? On the left it stops just before the edge of the cover where as on the right it goes to the edge ;)


Sounds logical to... i;ll give that a try to :) tnx teach :cheers:
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Post by sauron »

Sorry I didn't really explain it properly.

This is how I meant.
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I think i like Saurons suggestion ;)
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I thought that's what sauron ment in the first place, but nevertheless, could work i'll try that for sure, see how that pops up :)
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