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While I was really liking what you had before, I find myself agreeing with M0vieM0nster, looking good
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Liking the layout and style! Think it looks better than the first attempt :)
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I liked where the other one was going, but I can't complain, this one looks great too! Love the colors!
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Love the look of this one so far.. great colours :)
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Great colours and cool new style. :)
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Maybe give some sort of background for the boxes, it seems a bit bland behind the characters, I'm looking forward to more Bunny design.
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Post by quilva »

its looking really nice on the newer version Bunny, nice colours and style
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Post by Bunny Dojo »

Thanks for the encouragement, guys! Some of the choices and colors I would have never gone for in my usual style, so I'm happy to see that there's some interest in the result. :)

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QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Sep 2 2011, 06:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Maybe give some sort of background for the boxes, it seems a bit bland behind the characters
I tend to agree with you, but the trouble is that, especially with all of the text loaded in there, the front gets extremely heavy. I've tried faded images, "screened" images, one color images, you name it. :D I'm still hoping to figure out something to add in place of the car scene on front to add a little more punch to the design and make up for the rest being so straight.

Here's where I am so far... a lot of text. :6:

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Post by Arkflip »

Everything looks great except the legal/credits/logos color... i don't think the green color works there. I know you usually don't use black, but a darker color will probably work better. Just my 2 cents Timmo.
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Post by Paris »

I think it looks great. I see your point about the squares on the front.

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