Rise of the Planet of the Apes

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Nice update! I love the window, very clever!
I don't mind the green smoke, I recall it being a bit green too, but if you decide to go back to white smoke you could change the background wall to match the color in the film more, I believe it was a brownish or yellowish wall, that should help make the white smoke stand out.
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Thanks guys! I seem to have forgotten many details from the movie, colours etc, so I had to download a TS (shame on me!!). You're right about the wall colour, felipe. I'll try to match it better.

After seeing the movie for the second time, I got some inspiration for the back as well :)
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QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 15 2011, 05:00 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks guys! I seem to have forgotten many details from the movie, colours etc, so I had to download a TS (shame on me!!). You're right about the wall colour, felipe. I'll try to match it better.

After seeing the movie for the second time, I got some inspiration for the back as well :)


same just got back from seeing it for the 1st time and got some ideas on mine, sadly youve used the 'Home' on one of yours like i was thinking :cussing:

great covers m8, there is no green tinge to the smoke its like a browny grey btw
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Thanks mate, feel free to use the drawing :) It's not like I've copyrighted the idea... ;)

Added some brown to the wall and changed the smoke to white/grey. The combination brown wall/greenish smoke didn't look good. Now I'll concentrate on the back...
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Much better imo :thumbsup:
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great update!
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Perhaps try out to shrink the larger words in the spine TT; seems a tad too overlarge :)
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Post by sauron »

Looking a lot better but I'm sure the wall wasn't that brown me being a bit picky, sure it looked more like this... Not as brown.
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Have to agree, looks much better, great stuff, this is a winner
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Looking great so far... Do agree with JR about the title on the spine it does look to big, i'd reduce the size to around 50 - 60%

This is a serious contender for cover of the month :)
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