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The synopsis area looks much better, Jon! :)
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Thanks jollyroger it does look alot better now the synopsis is of their faces you can see the art work alot better with it been in the middle what do you think though would you say it is now completed do you think its time to put it in the gallery and thanks again for your comments and advice it means alot to get help from seasoned pros i have grown alot from when i first started 11 months ago you can tell from the covers i first uploaded but i am going to redo them at some point bye for now. jon
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nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Apr 3 2011, 01:58 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
• Get the actual WB template from this site, all of the giant logos are wasting space
• you don't need rating logos on the front and spine
• Removed the cropped credit block and type it out yourself for find a psd file
• This is the MOST IMPORTANT PART, look through our Master Dedigner galleries to see how to format the back of a cover, to spond some of your own fitting ideas

Nike run i did use a proper warner bros template from the site but then i mixed it up a bit so i could call it my own the difference is that on a warner bros template you dont get the spec boxes and so on i did not want it exactly the same so i thought i would change it abit and logos are the same size as they was on the template the thing is if we keep everything the same all the time the only difference in a cover template would be the artwork thats it. we need to mix the templates up from time to time to be different. Their is nothing wrong with the templates they are great but we need to mix things up so that the templates are different from each other not just the artwork.But thanks for your comments they are much appreciated. jon
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If you think the spine pic looks distorted i will find another one for it thanks for the heads up jon
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nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Apr 3 2011, 01:58 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
• Get the actual WB template from this site, all of the giant logos are wasting space
• you don't need rating logos on the front and spine
• Removed the cropped credit block and type it out yourself for find a psd file
• This is the MOST IMPORTANT PART, look through our Master Dedigner galleries to see how to format the back of a cover, to spond some of your own fitting ideas

Nikerun i did type out the credits myself and as for the credit box i put that their so you can see all of the credits as if that was not their in places on the artwork you cannot see certain places in the credits as it is white on white from the artwork that is why i put the box their. Normally i would try and use peoples comments but on this occasion i cannot as you would not be able to read part of the credits with been white on white but thanks again for your comments
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I have done the changes to your comments guys
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Post by weyn »

Again jon, you have two pictures in your screen bar on the back, where you got the right one from?
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Post by invisigoth »

Jon are you going to have a place for Special features when they're announced.?

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Post by easylife »

Synopsis looks hard to read, whats it like at full size? Id adjust the synopsis, maybe justify the right hand side or shape it around the women. the stills at the top could do with a better blend, maybe change the one on the left for a lighter colour background like the ones on the right, also they look odd to me just in the middle, what do they look like running across the whole of the top of the back cover instead of just in the centre.

the credits look poor just slapped in a black box, why not try dropping the opacity of the black box so its not as visible but the credits are still readable.
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Post by RRJR84 »

Jon get rid of the black credits box and add a drop shadow to our text to make them stand out more. Same this with your synopsis. As for that ugly specs box if you wan to use it than shrink and make room for your stuff. I don't think those specs are accurate to begin with seeing as the movie hasn't been released yet.
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