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Very well done B! Nice one, a few minor things your synopsis seems hard to read you do not have much room to make the font bigger?? And like JR says your credits block is a bit "blocky" did you try a few pixels smaller for it, and on your spine did you try just the rope on each side of the logos i think it would be a little less obvious, never saw the movies but your cover makes me curious i think a trip to the video store is on for today, very nice work again :thumb: :thumb:
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Thanks a lot pierre... I think ofr JR he didn't like how spaced out they were, so making them smaller might make that worse... I know they are big... they are frekin long with all the long Thai names.

I will try to work something out, but would like to avoid moving the ropes... if I can
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I got the spacing between the lines, i was thinking about the names could you use just the initials where possible and if you diminish the font size by a few pixels you might be able to get the line a bit tighter together, hey what ever you do great cover!!
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K, thanks buddy... I am working on it... will have an update tomorrow!
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I think you might need to throw another picture in the middle between all the ropes and other two sets of stills. It just seems empty maybe throw in a shot of that statue from the movie or something. Other than that fantastic job.
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Post by clark_ckcstm »

looks great.. but I'd like to see the spine logos flipped back to normal.

you can have the frames horizontal instead.
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Post by bpmford »

Hey RR... I think the section you mean is the one that was taking the Features/Specs.

Pierre... Made the synopsis font a tad bigger too.

Update...

showing a version of the spine with normal logos and no frames... I kind of like it better... cleaner!

Added the rest of the text too and messed around with the credits... adding... Legals... uh no... what have my covers come to? lol

(It just fills the space Brad, that's all!)

Thoughts?

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Post by PierreF10 »

Nice! On your spine if you like the logos that way, but i think you had them in a kind of off white or very light beige i would check if they look better in the beige-ish color, other than that i would call it done...oh one other thing what were you thinking legals, very nice cover B, nice job!!
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Ahhhh... don't remind me... I am ignoring the legals... :cussing:

The spine logos actually started in the same beige as the back ones, but since that color wasn't on the front, I didn't like it on the back... But I can easily show a preview:

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Looks Great, I forgot about the special features,lol :P that filled that spot in perfect. I really don't know what else you need to add.
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