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Post by gutterballs »

I was not crazy about the poster art nor any of the hi res sources for either of these films, so I am getting creative on these. Here's just a rough idea for covers and spines and original Title Treatments. Will have more shortly.
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Post by invisigoth »

I like your start on Irreversible..I did a cover for that title a long time ago, pretty intense movie..

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Here's the updates. The Crazies will add the type next. Irreversible synopsis is just filler for now, and will add SF's in the box above. Should I add a critic quote along the wall in the top pic? Feedback please?
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Post by clark_ckcstm »

try that wallquote.

the first cover looks fantastic..

the synopsis on irreverible will work :) the cover is so wierd that synopsis for Monster fits really good :rofl:
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Great start on both ;-)
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Post by Bunny Dojo »

Neither film has great resources available, but you'd never be able to tell based on these covers. Really nice job!

If you're looking for comments, the only thing that I can think of at the moment is to perhaps play around a little more with the type? On "Irreversible," the spacing in the actors' names looks a little strange since the title and director credit texts are closely spaced... maybe tighten them up a little bit? And then on The Crazies you've got a really cool concept going, but that "ZIES" cluster is a little rough... maybe just a tiny bit of white space between each letter?

Great job so far, I'm looking forward to seeing how you finish things out! :)
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Post by felipe-11 »

Great start on both gutters! You should add the quote on Irreversible, maybe in the same perpective as the wall (as if it was on the wall).
I like the TT for The Crazies, but right now it kinda looks like "The Razes", let the "I" breath a little. And maybe find a way to make the "C" in the hazard logo stand out more than the rest of the logo.
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Post by gutterballs »

Thanks everyone for the suggestions. I have been working on these with your help and here's the update for Irreversible. Update for Crazies coming soon. Comments?
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Post by invisigoth »

I like your take on this..! Spacing on the icons seems a little off?


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Post by gutterballs »

Update on The Crazies. Have a few things to finish and adjust.
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