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Since I can't be arsed to finish the back for Se7en ( :P ) I thought I'd show you what I've been working on instead. Thoughts/feedback anyone?
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I'm liking it so far!
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Cool start. Are you planning to fix the top of Hackman?

You seem to like green/blue and black?
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Me likes ;)
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QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Mar 1 2011, 08:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Cool start. Are you planning to fix the top of Hackman?

You seem to like green/blue and black?


Fix the top of Hackman? How do you mean? :chin:

Heh, now that I think of it I've used blue & green "a bit", haven't I? :P
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I'd move him away from the text block so that part of his head isn't cut off.
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I like this so far!

I'd recommend brightening it up tho. When it prints, some of the finer detail might be missed!
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Update. Removed the text block in the middle and changed a few things. Imo this feels cleaner & more "simplistic".
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Agreed brunell!
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The names at the top look weird to me, I'd put "WILL SMITH" above the title on the left and "GENE HACKMAN" on the far right. And the tagline at the bottom, removing the "from the director." Leave the top empty.

That's just me though. :whistle:
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