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made the image behind the lion more visable and changed the tagline to look more like the quote on the back.

Can this be it? Starting on the fun part, legals now!
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That's more like it. New front is waaaaaaay better. Only thing is the sand fading into sky at the bottom is a bit distracting to me. And how about moving the title up to the middle of the front, below the nose. Curious to see how that looks.
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Really good, much better.. although if you get chance i'd try Rob's suggestions too and how about adjusting the images slightly? The front seems quite overly exposed which looks fine in all honestly but the back could maybe use a tad of the same treatment? just to even it all out?
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QUOTE
That's more like it. New front is waaaaaaay better. Only thing is the sand fading into sky at the bottom is a bit distracting to me. And how about moving the title up to the middle of the front, below the nose. Curious to see how that looks.[/quote]

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Really good, much better.. although if you get chance i'd try Rob's suggestions too and how about adjusting the images slightly? The front seems quite overly exposed which looks fine in all honestly but the back could maybe use a tad of the same treatment? just to even it all out?[/quote]


OKI.

* Moved the TT on the front
* Tried to match the backpics to the front images.

Better?


* will try to clone of the sky from the bottom front.
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Now that's more like it! The transition from the tiger's hair is very light against the black background. I think it would fit better with a bright sky on the front, and on the back, I would like a beige color behind the special features and credits that matched tiger on the front.
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This is looking great now!

Well done with the new front!
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Post by sauron »

Looks really good, just not sure about the black boxes around "independence day" and "the day after tomorrow".

Also I would definitely move the title back down to the bottom.
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sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Jan 11 2011, 10:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks really good, just not sure about the black boxes around "independence day" and "the day after tomorrow".

Also I would definitely move the title back down to the bottom.



Agree about the TT. Part of me agree with you on the black boxes to but I think it looks empety with just the TT.
Added tre more boxes just for you :)

Keep them all or just a simple TT on its own?


Also blended the sky on the bottom darker.
Everything else with the cover is finished.
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Post by sauron »

Everything looks great apart from the text in the black boxes, it's too distracting.

Have you tried the front just with the title vertical and to the left?
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sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Jan 12 2011, 12:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Everything looks great apart from the text in the black boxes, it's too distracting.

Have you tried the front just with the title vertical and to the left?



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