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sauron
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Post by sauron »

Looking good but just a couple of things.

- On the stills, the image blending on the far left image and the one next to it could be a bit better as it is over lapping the guy. Maybe even add a couple of pictures to it as they do seem quite big at the moment.
- Make the spacing between the lines of the synopsis smaller so it fits better.
- Also turn hyphenating off for the synopsis.
- I think that you should do something with all the black on the back? Check out Kernies collection for some ideas.
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Post by clark_ckcstm »

looks like you still have XX as runtime
Last edited by clark_ckcstm on Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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