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Arkflip
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Post by Arkflip »

A real contender for COTM! Love everything so far Hiv.
Couple of things i think you should try:

- Legal info, credits and logo with the same color used on Disc 1/2/3
- Bigger front title. The actual looks good but i think a bigger one (just a little bigger) will work better
- Barcode without the black stroke or with 1px
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Post by sauron »

Love the update! Agree with Ark on everything especially the TT being bigger ;)
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Looks great, nothing to add yet.
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Post by PierreF10 »

Hi hiv!


looks very nice i think your tt is a bit small and is hidden in the mist a bit as for the colors of " actors " maybe to correct both problems would be to put a gradient layer above the picture and under the title put to multiply and lower opacity to 30-40 % make it a blue layer ( figure the shade that works best for you) and start your gradient below TT up to eyebrows or forehead, nice going i'm looking forward to the finished back.

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Post by hiv »

small update.
- fixed face colors of jake
- tt is little bigger
- barcode without stroke
- legal info color changed
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Post by Throavium »

This looks really good to me.
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Post by Arkflip »

Much better imo!
Now i'm curious to see how this will end :)
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Post by hiv »

So this is final update.
Any sugestions? Something add/remove?
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Post by jcdesign »

This looks great. My suggestion is on the front is non floating at the character, move them down a bit or make them smaller and put the TT over their head.
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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

I think some sort of smoke effect at the bottom will better blend the characters into the rest of the space on the front. The way they just fade out looks weird to me.
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