Spider-man 3

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Post by Throavium »

Not going to abandon this like my Iron Man cover, here's what I have so far, though very generic.

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Nice start so far!! Love the overexposed image and how it bleeds onto the spine!!

Looking forward to seeing more!! :D :D :D
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Post by Skar »

hi Throavium,

may be it looks generic but it's fine and i wouldn't say more than Kernie. waiting to see more
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Thanks a lot.

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Post by Paris »

Hey " inexperienced designer"
The front looks great but maybe play with the "selective color" on Toby's face to bring out more red (natural) and his lips look too purple

On the back
• spiderman seems to be dominating the cover too much to leave room for: quotes, summary, taglines
maybe shrink him a bit and place him be hing everything below him including the blacksquare shape)
• the photos on the back seem really dark, try brightening them up or find more daylight pictures

Waiting for more mate "experienced designer"
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

The front of the cover looks great and far better than i expected when i clicked on the thread to have a peek although i would try the suggestions of possibly trying to play with the colour of his lips a bit to make them more realistic. The back also looks great and my suggestions depends on whether you intend the cover to be a complete custom or a custom following a more retail like design (my personal choice). If your going for the first option the cover is fine as it is... the second? Might I suggest only that you could possibly move the main back image down and add a barcode above spidermans head still cutting it off slightly leaving the same general continuity from the front whilst leaving more room for a synopsis and maybe a quote ;-) Either way i too am looking forward to seeing where you go from here, great start!
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Movie I'm sorry to day that I was being absolutely honest calling him an experienced designer because this is a better spiderman cover than I would make.

I just thought it was strange and funny that he is "inexperienced" after great game covers that the site needed ;)

Keep up the great work mate, I'm sorry if you thought this offensive
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Post by Arkflip »

Best Spider-Man 3 cover i've seen!
Agree with everything Nikerun said.
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

I'm sorry i think i may have mis-understood the way things had been put, that being the case i appologise. I would usualy start by saying hey "artist's name" and thefore I kinda thought the "inexperienced designer" was directed at Throavium which of course would have been rude but... clearly not the case. Please forgive me for my mistake nikerun147?

I've made a fool of myself :-(
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Paris and Clint go get a room!! :D
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