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Post by clark_ckcstm »

Very cool box with synopsis and special. look a bit empty in the big box. Great color. great match.
maybe fade a picture in it or more text.

I think you should change the big image on the back to another. Bit boring with a posing pic like that. lot of action in this flic I think you can find a better image.

Also change the DVDlogo on the Spine. IMO.
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I think the final.
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Post by felipe-11 »

Nice work mate, but the red text on the back is a bit hard to read... maybe try it in white?
Also how about adding something to legal's background?
Other than that I'd say it's finished :)
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Post by Arkflip »

Apart from what was already said by the guys, i think you should do something like this for the front and for the back legal area.
Ignore the info 'cause it's not the movie's legal info.

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Post by clark_ckcstm »

change dvdlogo on the spine
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Post by sauron »

I think the red text on the back stands out too much, I would change the colour the blue colour. Also what Ark has done looks good, I would do that if I were you.
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The legal area remains. Because the suggestion from arkflip ist the RC1 standard. I can't put it on my german RC2 Cover. ;)

The other things i'll try out.
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Post by sauron »

Make the Credits the same as Arkflips then as it will look much better.
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Better ?
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Post by sauron »

Much better, but I would change the yellow colour text above the synopsis to the blue as it will match the cover more?
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