X-Men Origins: Wolverine

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On the front maybe remove the background and the tagline and place characters(or sabertooth) there in a setting related to the movie
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unfortunately I have to say, you have to get rid of something ... why have to add synopsis and the special features of Disc 1 and 2. :chin: I do not see the exact size for such a thing.

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I think you should remove the questions stuff at the bottom of the cover and remove the bar code to give you more room. I really like the claws, but you need you need to make room for the synopsis and special features.
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Is this better? Also has anyone got this logo.
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-Update

Does the claw look okay?
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Looks fine to me, great looking cover
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Not bad Sauron, but the text looks hard to read. Perhaps remove the gradient and create a white flash behind the text so it seems more fitting. Keep it up :jump:
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Is this better. Also does the rip on the claw look better?
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Anyone care to help me get this one finished? Thanks
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Down to business huh mate? ;)
On the back:
• the synopsis looks too close to the edges, maybe move them down and decrease font size (play with the color)
• under the synosis would be a great place for the special features
• If you want to try something different (you may hate me for this) remove te claws for a still with edges blending into the background

How many discs come with the movie? This seems like a thick case. Other than that this looks like a nice product Sauron :) :) :)
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