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Ok. started this.

Man "The Island" is hard. :cussing: Dunno if its lack of nice images or just boring images.

Any Ideas? Should I continue?
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I like it so far! Maybe change the synopsis font to be something more legible. Something less futuristic..other than that, nice start.
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It doesn't look bad...

I'd say that you should try to duplicate the effect of the front on the back with the horizontal lines!
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I like the front a lot, agree with bpm about using the lines through the back, need something under the synopsis.
I think the little people on the front could be a tad whiter
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bpmford wrote:
QUOTE (bpmford @ Nov 20 2010, 07:11 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It doesn't look bad...

I'd say that you should try to duplicate the effect of the front on the back with the horizontal lines!



Tnx.

Any idea how to make that effect easy.
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Good to see you finding your way back to PS :)
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Thank you RV.

Ok.

made the front top brighter and the little people more white nad helicopters more visable.

made some lines and erased some parts like the eye and ewan and scarlett.
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Post by clark_ckcstm »

OK

noone did comment and I wasnt very happy with it..

Started all over again!!

How about this?

a bit diffrent from the poster alot of covers to this flic has.

Should the back be in grey also? or color?
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I like this better mr C... havent seen that approach to the front before... as for the back... I like the B/W with the green touches but perhaps add a splash of colour somewhere to make it all pop
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Great new design! I agree with you that the images for this movie are really limited considering it's a big Michael Bay film. It looks like you're making the most out of what's out there, though. :) My one piece advice would be that instead of green maybe you try to match the style of the outfit everyone has in the movie? (I think it's either navy for men or robin's egg blue for women). In my eyes, the green makes it feel a little too "organic" for the things the film has going on.

Really nice update! I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it from here. :)
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