The Dark Knight

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Post by JollyRoger »

levels on the joker needs afjustment - and some red colour??
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Looks good, I think it would look better if you didn't blend the picture line on the back and showed the edges
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Thanks for the feedback, here's an update, much better I think:

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I think you should change the grey backgrounds to white, it might look a little better
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Being picky you could reduce the stroke size around the barcode box or lose it.
Also the numbers under the barcode should be grey or black, white doesn't work.

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nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Sep 13 2010, 05:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think you should change the grey backgrounds to white, it might look a little better

White was my first choice for it actually, then I ditched it, but now I think I like it better :)

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Fixed that barcode too Felipe, thanks
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Not too sure about the Joker being so blue... I would take the saturation down a bit on the blue and red.

Still don't think the Cape is working either.
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Looks done to me, and it looks delicious. I want it in, and around my Blu-ray case. And I'm sure my Blu-ray case feels the same. It wants to be wrapped up and snuggled tightly with this cover.
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sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Sep 13 2010, 05:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not too sure about the Joker being so blue... I would take the saturation down a bit on the blue and red.

Still don't think the Cape is working either.

Damn, you were right! A little desaturation can go a long way...

[attachment=13533:The_Dark...review_1.jpg]

No changes on the cape though, I've tried a bunch of things but I can't get it to look any better than that... If anyone cares to make a mockup to give me some pointers be my guest, if not, I'll be leaving it like that, I don't think it looks that bad anyway (and Relocator seems like he kinda likes it too :D )

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QUOTE (Relocator @ Sep 13 2010, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks done to me, and it looks delicious. I want it in, and around my Blu-ray case. And I'm sure my Blu-ray case feels the same. It wants to be wrapped up and snuggled tightly with this cover.

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