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Post by JollyRoger »

ditto :)


Perhaps tone down the white glow on that last pic ur talking about? Looks a little too bright, if nitpicking...c
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id say perfect, but its better than that
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Superb work :thumb:
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Post by LittleCoolDude »

this one looks phenominal! didn't think you could improve on what you did before, but you did! great work.
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Post by felipe-11 »

Having a second look, I like it better without those stick/tree frames on the front like on the first version. But it's just a minor detail I guess... :)
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felipe-11 wrote:
QUOTE (felipe-11 @ Aug 31 2010, 03:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Having a second look, I like it better without those stick/tree frames on the front like on the first version. But it's just a minor detail I guess... :)

I'd actually intended the bamboo frame to be there from the beginning, but it kinda came to a point where I said, "I'm sick of looking at this, it's done." Then after the DeviantArt feature, I went back added more stuff to make it a more complete picture. And even now, I've come to realize the space next to Jake's head is missing something, so I'm currently trying to fill that void.
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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

Well, I think I figured out what the front was still missing. I think this one simple addition really helps unify the whole image.

Still contemplating what to do about the image on the back. And here's the obligatory DVD version as well (gotta find some screenshots to fill that new gap).
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I'm not too sure on the new box at the top of the front.
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Post by Paris »

I like the back design:)
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Post by nok »

Very very nice! I like the addition you made to the front.

For the DVD (back), maybe use a normal size barcode and enlarge the quote a bit, so the rest can shift some more down?
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