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I'm thinking about adding vader's head in the back. Is this better with the characters?
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I think it looks better with them but somehow you're still missing something... not sure if it's the Star Wars logo...
How about something like?

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I like the star wars logo way better. thanks Arkflip! Should I move on to the spine?
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Just move the logo and the chapter's name a bit down, add more space between them and you'll be ready to move on.
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I'm liking it, but you should add a few more characters, Leia looks kinda lonely (maybe add R2 and C3PO).
Also the TT looks kinda weird (specially the R's), maybe you should go with the official TT:

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Thanks! I'll add chewbacca and C-3PO next to Leia but I think the tt looks fine besides moving it down a bit. I can't wait to see your Original series!!
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Can you enlarge the characters as they get closer to Luke? Right now, Luke is in the foreground and all the others are in the background. Maybe they could make some kind of "V" formation. And I agree you should add a few more characters... I'd say 3 on each side of Luke would look cool. And there are certainly enough characters in the Star Wars universe to do that. :D :D
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A little update
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Looking really good, I like the spine too but you should make the part with the pic a bit lighter so Luke stands out more. Add someone next to Chewie and I'd say its done!
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