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felipe-11 has inspired me to return to my star wars collection and make it how it should be, I'm sorry Filipe if the style is similar. Is it a keeper? :yellow:
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Dude... what a tiny synopsis!! :D
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It's awesome I inspired you nike! And don't be sorry, it's looking great so far, only thing I can say make the synopsis a bit bigger like Ark says :D
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Update. I'll add the special features when the features are actually released, but you guys can add your own text in the box for now :thumb:
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should I keep the photos or put it on it's own separate cover
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I like the front with out the photo's nikerun, I think they take away from the front image you have which is pretty good on its own :)
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is this good?
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update
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Ok, couple of things...
Like i already said to you previously you really need to increase the synopsis size. It's too small and hard to read and it's also huge!
You should also considerer to work on a new template 'cause all your work is based on this one (Bond covers for example). And this last update i really don't like to see those two images above the other one.
Another thing i'm curious to know is how good are the pictures you're using for the fronts. They all seem a bit low resolution but could be from the previews. To be honest i don't think the images used so far for the fronts are working for the titles but it's up to you.
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I like it, my only suggestion would be to do something with the barcode, if you want to leave it you should make it smaller or something, it just looks way too big.
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