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by CavemanLawyer
Sat Sep 27, 2014 2:30 pm
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Guardians of the galaxy
Replies: 37
Views: 8095

I think this looks amazing. My only suggestion would be to swap out some of your stills.

Instead of that pic of Pratt I think this would be a good place to use a shot of him wearing his mask. Also it looks like two of your stills mostly feature Gammora. Maybe switch one out with another character ...
by CavemanLawyer
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:00 pm
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Guardians of the galaxy
Replies: 37
Views: 8095

Even though the mask looks cool, Pratt's uncovered smirk face is much better for this cover in my opinion. So I vote without mask.
by CavemanLawyer
Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:57 am
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Guardians of the galaxy
Replies: 37
Views: 8095

I don't like the tagline itself. I don't think it makes sense with this movie.
by CavemanLawyer
Thu Sep 25, 2014 10:57 pm
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Guardians of the galaxy
Replies: 37
Views: 8095

I love everything except the tagline on the front. I don't get it. Unlike all the other superhero movies other than the Avengers, this is a movie about a team not a single member. The name of the movie itself implies more than one superhero.

So I think it'd either need to be "bad a$&#036 ...
by CavemanLawyer
Tue Sep 23, 2014 1:39 am
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Guardians of the Galaxy
Replies: 29
Views: 9997

I would suggest shifting the actor's names on the front to match up with the images below. As is they perfectly line up with a character, just the wrong character. I know sometimes billings don't match up with the artwork because contracts demand center billing etc... but this isn't the case here ...
by CavemanLawyer
Sat Sep 13, 2014 10:42 pm
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Guardians of the Galaxy
Replies: 29
Views: 9997

I agree with the above comments. I think it could use even more variation also. The spaceship on the front and back looks almost identical. I'd lose one, probably the one on the back. Also I can tell that you are recycling the background image from the front on the back as well. I recognize some of ...
by CavemanLawyer
Thu Mar 20, 2014 1:50 am
Forum: Show Case
Topic: Super Hero Collection
Replies: 335
Views: 60791

Awesome stuff. But what is at the end of the tagline on The amazing Spider-Man? Is that an exclamation point ( !) ? It looks more like an S or some sort of lightning bolt. I think it should look like the exclamation point you used on the other covers.
by CavemanLawyer
Sun Mar 16, 2014 4:09 am
Forum: Show Case
Topic: Super Hero Collection
Replies: 335
Views: 60791

These all look great but I think there is a language barrier that is causing minor grammatical errors on otherwise perfect covers. I'll go ahead and point out what I can see but before you are done I think you should show some close ups of your text so we can proof read.

Iron Man 3: The tagline at ...
by CavemanLawyer
Fri Feb 28, 2014 2:28 am
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Oblivion
Replies: 31
Views: 7984

I just watched this movie last night. I think you should scrap the empire state building because I don't think it makes sense. If the building collapses then there is no way its going to look like that. The tip of it is not going remain intact protruding from the ground. Of the entire building that ...
by CavemanLawyer
Mon Feb 03, 2014 2:21 am
Forum: Closed WIP's
Topic: Thor : The Dark World
Replies: 43
Views: 4479

I still see a problem in the synopsis. On the second to last line after the word Thor there is a huge gap before the next word. I can tell you tried to manually adjust things and the tracking automatically spaced things to compensate. Hightlight the text on that line or the other line(s) that you ...

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