Pelé: Birth of a Legend

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by Speedz0r » Sat Aug 13, 2016 10:05 pm

Looks good, except for what's been mentioned, but i like the faded TT much better tho, so I say, keep the first TT style ;)

by SherifDingo » Sat Aug 13, 2016 8:09 pm

Bazzah wrote:
QUOTE (Bazzah @ Aug 13 2016, 09:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The front looks good :)

Watch the synopsis. It looks like the font you are using doesn't have an apostrophe. Couldn t should be couldn't and Brazil s should be Brazil's. It could do with a few commas and full stops too :D

Oh, and it's Football not Soccer :lol:

it's me not the font :lsmile:

by bazzah » Sat Aug 13, 2016 7:49 pm

The front looks good :)

Watch the synopsis. It looks like the font you are using doesn't have an apostrophe. Couldn t should be couldn't and Brazil s should be Brazil's. It could do with a few commas and full stops too :D

Oh, and it's Football not Soccer :lol:

by sauron » Sat Aug 13, 2016 7:26 pm

Looks much better now :) how about adding some noise to the front to match the image of Pele? See my attachment which I have over done the noise just so you can see it.

by SherifDingo » Sat Aug 13, 2016 7:14 pm

I did some changes on the front what do you think?

[attachment=34500:Naamloos_1.png]

[attachment=34501:Pel_____...a_Legend.png]

by Speedz0r » Wed Aug 10, 2016 1:43 pm

I really like the colors and lens flares you've used, but i'm also not sure about the different placements.

by sauron » Wed Aug 10, 2016 8:02 am

Good start - Maybe move the TT down so there's some breathing room?

by bazzah » Mon Aug 08, 2016 6:58 pm

This looks good, but I am not sure about the tag and ball placement. They look out of place? I would also fade the ball and flag, to make them look more distant.

by SherifDingo » Mon Aug 08, 2016 6:18 pm

Started just the front any comments are welcome.

[attachment=34464:Pel_____...a_Legend.png]

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