The Brave One

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by Arkflip » Tue Aug 05, 2014 8:31 pm

Topic closed. Please finish your other wips first and then, if you want, ask a moderator to re-open this topic.

by sauron » Tue Aug 05, 2014 8:01 pm

Looking good so far - got a few suggestions/improvements though...

1. On the front and spine the DVD logo gets lost, try changing it to white.
2. The quote on the front has too many different front weights try just making "wrongs" and "right"
3. Maybe just use on image on the spine?
4. I think you need less large images on the back and as there is way too much going on, try using one or maybe two at max focus images and then add some stills, the synopsis would then work better with a different layout.

Take your time on these and try not to rush through them, I've noticed you've got a few W.I.P open at the moment.

by Ichy007 » Tue Aug 05, 2014 1:01 pm

...cont'd from my Swordfish thread, this is better now too, I think...

Feedback welcome regarding the improvements/alterations... Again, for avoidance of doubt, the one with lines across the front is the rework (and it's deliberate graining, not pixelation); the other is the old version for comparison (the cover wasn't mine but the new one is).

Ichy

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