Thor : The Dark World

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by edulopez » Thu Feb 06, 2014 8:27 pm

Great job! I love it! I hope to see more Marvel covers in the same style.

by CavemanLawyer » Mon Feb 03, 2014 2:21 am

I still see a problem in the synopsis. On the second to last line after the word Thor there is a huge gap before the next word. I can tell you tried to manually adjust things and the tracking automatically spaced things to compensate. Hightlight the text on that line or the other line(s) that you adjusted and go to Window/Character. Adjust the tracking option (looks like an AV with arrows under it.) Play with it until everything is spaced uniformly.

Under the special features section it says, "Never-Before-Seen Extend and Deleted Scenes." The word Extend should be Extended.

by sauron » Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:48 pm

Great work - looks done to me :)

by venome » Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:34 pm

Very nice work! :)

by JollyRoger » Sun Feb 02, 2014 10:31 pm

You're fast, Nic! :thumbsup:

by SherifDingo » Sun Feb 02, 2014 9:18 pm

Nicely done. ;)

by xshoty » Sun Feb 02, 2014 8:10 pm

Ok think i'm done with this one ? :D

by xshoty » Sun Feb 02, 2014 5:05 am

Thx for the feedback m8 ! :D It's really appreciated ! I will take a look on what you said and try to change it ! :D

by CavemanLawyer » Sun Feb 02, 2014 4:04 am

In your synopsis the words "Marvel's" and "Brother" are broken up and continued on the next line. Either manually space things or adjust the kerning to keep the words from getting cut off.

Is that really how Walt Disney Studio's logo looks these days?

I'm not really a fan of "The Black Elves Are Coming" for various reasons. I get that its very comic book like but it looks cheesy to me. Also what are you gonna say for the first Thor? "Loki was here?"

I love everything else about this cover and would absolutely use it.

by xshoty » Fri Jan 31, 2014 7:11 pm

Thx guys !!! :D

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