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by JollyRoger » Sat May 10, 2025 8:49 pm

Wrapping this up

by JollyRoger » Sat May 10, 2025 7:40 pm

M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ May 10 2025, 09:29 PM) on the box i mean ;)
Ok, toned it done some.

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by M0vieM0nster » Sat May 10, 2025 7:29 pm

on the box i mean ;)

by M0vieM0nster » Sat May 10, 2025 7:27 pm

Looks great, with the front how about taking a slight bit of the vibrance and saturation away just to tone it down a bit?

by JollyRoger » Sat May 10, 2025 5:13 pm

Bunny Dojo wrote:QUOTE (Bunny Dojo @ May 10 2025, 07:01 PM) The back looks fantastic! :cheers:

The front has a nice impact, but it doesn't quite feel threatening yet. Maybe the stickers are a bit too bright white and happy? Or maybe the stickers are too big? Or maybe the box's back and right flaps are too bright? I can't quite pin down what it is, but there's something preventing it from fully feeling like a movie prop rather than clip art, and if you can find that extra adjustment the front would probably look as fantastic as your back cover.

Another option might be to zoom in even further and do something like the old Fight Club special edition, where the front is the box:

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Ok, Darkened the stickers - and the box itself - plus darkened the back flaps as well. Is this better then?


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by Bunny Dojo » Sat May 10, 2025 5:01 pm

JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ May 10 2025, 09:47 AM) Think the back is done.
The back looks fantastic! :cheers:

The front has a nice impact, but it doesn't quite feel threatening yet. Maybe the stickers are a bit too bright white and happy? Or maybe the stickers are too big? Or maybe the box's back and right flaps are too bright? I can't quite pin down what it is, but there's something preventing it from fully feeling like a movie prop rather than clip art, and if you can find that extra adjustment the front would probably look as fantastic as your back cover.

Another option might be to zoom in even further and do something like the old Fight Club special edition, where the front is the box:

[attachment=50242:fc1.jpg]

by JollyRoger » Sat May 10, 2025 3:45 pm

Just a matter of darkening the foreground, really.

Hows this?


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by stampe » Sat May 10, 2025 3:10 pm

Great work buddy. i think what puts me off about the box is that it looks like its floating. maybe add a ground to put it on, idk :)

by JollyRoger » Sat May 10, 2025 1:47 pm

Speedz0r wrote:QUOTE (Speedz0r @ May 10 2025, 03:23 PM) Wow, this looks tremendous! The back is amazing :love: . I'm not too keen on the box on the front, but I ofc get the concept. At the moment tho, I don't feel like the front complements the back very well.
Thanks Speed, appreciated.
To make it work better, I re-used some of the red-ish color - and the 7 sins in letters across the front, in the background, like beneath the synopsis. Think this works?

And decided to put in some well-placed stills on the back while I was at it. Think the back is done.

How's this?

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by Speedz0r » Sat May 10, 2025 1:23 pm

Wow, this looks tremendous! The back is amazing :love: . I'm not too keen on the box on the front, but I ofc get the concept. At the moment tho, I don't feel like the front complements the back very well.

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