Star Wars - Obi-Wan Kenobi

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by bazzah » Fri Apr 11, 2025 3:26 pm

Topic closed :)

by JollyRoger » Fri Apr 11, 2025 3:04 pm

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Fixed all the suggestions. Cover uploaded and FINISHED.

This can be closed.

by JollyRoger » Fri Apr 11, 2025 2:34 pm

Fidi wrote:QUOTE (Fidi @ Apr 11 2025, 10:08 AM) Another great one to your Star Wars collection. Love the front image! :)

The only thing I'd suggest is change the exposure of Darth Vader. He is exposed from the left Obi Wan is from the right and youn Leia right/front.

Since he is early all black it shouldn't be to difficult, it's only his helmet. you could mirror him as well but the lightsaber would be in the wrong hand then.

The Tie fighter also from the right so you might rotate the starship on the left for about 30°-40° to the right as well.
GlobalCinema wrote:QUOTE (GlobalCinema @ Apr 11 2025, 10:34 AM) The only thing that is throwing me off is on the back between Darth Vader's feet is the black and white distressed element of the background. It keeps drawing my eyes to that element. Maybe just tidy it up down there. Just a thought.
Damn, more work on an already finished and uploaded cover.. :D :D I need my Moderator skillz back, so I can quickly close these, lol

I'll see what I can do dammit. :D :cheers:

by GlobalCinema » Fri Apr 11, 2025 8:34 am

The only thing that is throwing me off is on the back between Darth Vader's feet is the black and white distressed element of the background. It keeps drawing my eyes to that element. Maybe just tidy it up down there. Just a thought.

by Fidi » Fri Apr 11, 2025 8:08 am

Another great one to your Star Wars collection. Love the front image! :)

The only thing I'd suggest is change the exposure of Darth Vader. He is exposed from the left Obi Wan is from the right and youn Leia right/front.

Since he is early all black it shouldn't be to difficult, it's only his helmet. you could mirror him as well but the lightsaber would be in the wrong hand then.

The Tie fighter also from the right so you might rotate the starship on the left for about 30°-40° to the right as well.

by JollyRoger » Thu Apr 10, 2025 4:30 pm

sauron wrote:QUOTE (sauron @ Apr 10 2025, 04:11 PM) This looks awesome! I'm guessing I'm a bit too late to the party but I feel the colour of the text is too similar to the background colours. Perhaps, a darker shade of the colour you have now?

With the colours being too similar, my eyes aren't sure what they're meant to be looking at first.

I can amend that, np

by sauron » Thu Apr 10, 2025 2:11 pm

This looks awesome! I'm guessing I'm a bit too late to the party but I feel the colour of the text is too similar to the background colours. Perhaps, a darker shade of the colour you have now?

With the colours being too similar, my eyes aren't sure what they're meant to be looking at first.

by JollyRoger » Sun Apr 06, 2025 11:51 am

Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Apr 6 2025, 01:11 PM) I really like it, except like you I am undecided on the text colour
- Added the Inquisitorial Tie Fighter to the front

- Toned down the orange text color some (was too stark IMO); think this is better.
- Adjusted the characters on the back
- Adjusted the background images some
- Adjusted the space ships on the back

Thinking this is about done?

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by bazzah » Sun Apr 06, 2025 11:11 am

I really like it, except like you I am undecided on the text colour

by JollyRoger » Sun Apr 06, 2025 9:25 am

Update:

- Fixed the sky's colors and some moon placement on the front
- Added Inquisitors spaceships to the back
- Added the row of characters

Can't decide if the orange text color is right for the main yellow color?

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