The Last Kingdom

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by bazzah » Fri Jan 17, 2025 6:06 pm

I get what you mean about the colours, and I am undecided on the orange. What about a compromise between the orange and yellow? Add some yellow to the orange, and de-saturate it? That being said, I like the yellow border on the features box. But you have to go with what you like my friend. This is your design, so listen to our opinions but go with your gut :)

by Speedz0r » Fri Jan 17, 2025 5:45 pm

What if you move the Bonus Features down into the SF box, change the BF text to black and move the points (SF's) down a little?
PS: You need to do more covers my friend :love:

by bankska22 » Fri Jan 17, 2025 2:14 pm

Wow! I love the progress on this JR.

by JollyRoger » Fri Jan 17, 2025 1:01 pm

My problem is that I want same colour for both borders (SF box+stills) and specs/legal area. What works in only one of these areas doesn't work in the other, I feel.
The orange is a little harsh on the eye in the legal area, but works on the borders. The cream would work in the legal area, but doesn't really work well for the borders IMO.

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Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jan 17 2025, 01:49 PM) I don't mind them as they are, but you could try something similar to fdd08d
That said -if you think it works as is, maybe it's just my over-critical eye that finds a problem...

by bazzah » Fri Jan 17, 2025 12:49 pm

I don't mind them as they are, but you could try something similar to fdd08d

by JollyRoger » Fri Jan 17, 2025 12:45 pm

Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jan 17 2025, 01:35 PM) The black actor names work better, and the features works so much better now too. The Bonus Features text is bothering me though, as it blends in to the background. Maybe a drop shadow on the text will help?
Done.

What about the colour of borders/legal/specs?

by bazzah » Fri Jan 17, 2025 12:35 pm

The black actor names work better, and the features works so much better now too. The Bonus Features text is bothering me though, as it blends in to the background. Maybe a drop shadow on the text will help?

by JollyRoger » Fri Jan 17, 2025 11:33 am

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So, I think front and spine is almost there, unless someone has some final input?

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For the back I've worked specifically on the SF box and legal, changing colour slightly on the latter. Can't decide if this is better?

Also added some flame to the edge of the burning synopsis paper; think that part is done.

by stampe » Fri Jan 17, 2025 10:56 am

definitely the 2nd one :)

by Speedz0r » Thu Jan 16, 2025 10:10 pm

I like the black one best as it's a lot easier to read and fits "a map" better. The synopsis are total fire now btw, fantastic work with the burning flames :)

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