Waterworld (1995)

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by Sxxo » Tue Jan 14, 2025 7:22 pm

That's a lot of great tips that i gona try :)

Thanks to all, for your time :cheers:

by Fidi » Tue Jan 14, 2025 6:29 pm

What they said, the image of Costner should be big er compared to.your scene in the front.

And I also agree it's a bit to much texts and maybe leave some on the back and add a few morgen images instead.

Keep it going, I think that's the right direction and I really like that built scenery in the front. :)

by bankska22 » Mon Jan 13, 2025 3:32 pm

Coming together nicely.

by bazzah » Mon Jan 13, 2025 11:16 am

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by JollyRoger » Mon Jan 13, 2025 9:50 am

Maybe leave out the ´watch anywhere´banner and instead have the row of stills?
I would make Costner bigger.
Remember to have the movie name in yellow, in the credits block.

Keep it up!

by Bunny Dojo » Sun Jan 12, 2025 11:13 pm

It's great to see you returning to this one, Sxxo!

For the back, what if you were to put the "Disc Two" text on the left and "Disc Three" text stacked on the right, and put the Costner picture in the center?
Or, maybe you can move the entire waterline (including the front image) down a little bit, just to give yourself some extra room to space out the text?

For the front, maybe you can center "Kevin Costner" and split the tagline onto 3 lines? (Beyond the horizon // Lies the secret // To a new beginning)
Or, maybe try the tagline up top in your dark blue?
Your imagery creates a great sense of epic scale, but the text is kind of crowded and tight.

by bazzah » Sun Jan 12, 2025 7:40 pm

This looks a lot better. The other version was very cluttered on the back, imo. I like Costner on the jet ski :)

by Sxxo » Sun Jan 12, 2025 7:30 pm

Persuting JR tip about the main character should be more visible, i found an image of the "mariner".

So i'm testing the perpective, place and size.

I had to move the text a bit, so i haven't try yet a diferrent yellow or a shade, like JR said.

I plan to put 2 screen on the right.

by Sxxo » Sun Dec 29, 2024 10:44 pm

Thanks for the tips. I will try them :)
The yellow colour in my sony vaio looks mutch better and bright... :(

by JollyRoger » Sat Dec 28, 2024 1:06 pm

This is excellent work Sxxo, great job so far!

I would suggest to try and add Costner to the left (above the screen caps) and move the text a bit to the right. The backside is very text heavy and I think we need to see the main character.

Also, not sure if the yellow text works.. Maybe just try to have it in bold?
If that doesn’t work I would try a different brighter shade of yellow? This one looks a little green (maybe it’s just against all the blue). If you stick with a yellow, I think the movie name in the credit block would benefit from having the same colour.
Keep it up!

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