The Shallows (2016)

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by Sxxo » Wed Oct 26, 2022 11:25 am

Bunny Dojo wrote:QUOTE (Bunny Dojo @ Oct 25 2022, 11:51 PM) Either way works. :)
Nice job, it's great to see you back in action with two big covers in a row! :cheers:
I liked in caps, so i gave it a try.
As for the covers...thanks for the input. The next one will be (i whish to :innocent: ) a little project of mine that you probably remember :) .

M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Oct 26 2022, 12:12 AM) Brilliant work, my only suggestion now i think might be the spacing between the and shallows on the front tt compared to the spine?
You're right. Good spot. Will correct that.

by M0vieM0nster » Tue Oct 25, 2022 11:12 pm

Brilliant work, my only suggestion now i think might be the spacing between the and shallows on the front tt compared to the spine?

by Bunny Dojo » Tue Oct 25, 2022 10:51 pm

Sxxo wrote:QUOTE (Sxxo @ Oct 25 2022, 05:56 PM) One question to BD: the 4 line TAG tip it's to make them in caps or regular letters?
Either way works. :)
Nice job, it's great to see you back in action with two big covers in a row! :cheers:

by Sxxo » Tue Oct 25, 2022 9:56 pm

I follow the tips and suggestions and now i think it's done.
Only the barcode stayed in black cas i realy tried it in 4 different green tones and they don't feel right.

Thanks to all for the help.

One question to BD: the 4 line TAG tip it's to make them in caps or regular letters?

Cheers :cheers:

by Bunny Dojo » Wed Oct 19, 2022 2:55 pm

Nice to see your progress on this, Sxxo! :cheers:

Along with what the guys have said about some of the other texts, I'd also recommend trying the tagline as 4 lines moved up a bit, since you have that extra space:

What was once
in the deep
is now
in the shallows.

(Or, you could just move the 2-line version up a bit and make your stills larger to help fill things out.)

by Speedz0r » Wed Oct 19, 2022 10:21 am

I agree with sauron. The top also looks a bit empty seeing you have three quotes right on top of each other instead of a bit more spread out.

by sauron » Mon Oct 17, 2022 2:32 pm

I like what you have done so far but the synopsis needs more room around the box to give it some breathing space. Also, having it set to justify is causing the big gaps between words, I would keep it left aligned.

Maybe change the colour of the barcode to green?

by Sxxo » Sat Oct 15, 2022 4:24 pm

Hi all.
An update of the back.
Colours, elements and placement testing, but still left a couple of things to do.
I know that the shark looks odd. I don't intent to make it in perspetive, cas "this don't make any sense...not everything does, not everything as to" (doctor strange 2016 :D )

by Blacksteel » Fri Sep 30, 2022 8:01 am

Great works all the started!

by sauron » Wed Sep 28, 2022 10:25 am

I agree, the buoy looks better now.

Personally, I feel Blake could still be less yellow... something like the attached.

[attachment=47185:shallows.jpg]

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