Death Wish 2018

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by Speedz0r » Tue Feb 20, 2018 9:00 am

I think it looks okay as it is, but the H on the spine is really hard to read and I would put the Bruce layer above the tagline so it doesn't cut off his head. Also, try to match the Bruce on the back with the one on the front (colors, brightness/contrast etc). I wounder how the legals and credits will look tho, since most of your text is white and the background is white on the bottom, fading to black. So can't really tell how good the background image is working atm.

by sauron » Mon Feb 19, 2018 6:26 pm

Hmmm I'm not sure about the black - why not just use another picture of the same scenery in the background and then adjust Bruce to match the scene?

by kruifdesign » Fri Feb 16, 2018 9:11 pm

Update :

[attachment=38741:Death_Wish.jpg]

by RookerDesigns » Wed Feb 14, 2018 7:18 am

The paint splatter isn't working for me. Doesn't fit with this type of movie..

by M0vieM0nster » Tue Feb 13, 2018 3:24 am

Maybe try desaturating the new background and losing some opacity so it's there but more subtle?

by Speedz0r » Mon Feb 12, 2018 8:40 pm

I agree with both sauron and Fidi. Also,the city image seems to have too many colors for me atm, maybe change it to something like the blue grunge you have on the top of the front? You could try and play with "shadows/highlights" to try and bring more detail back into the image of Bruce on the front.

by sauron » Mon Feb 12, 2018 7:06 pm

I like the addition of the background but not keen on how it just cuts off on the back... I do also still think the synopsis is too large.

As Fidi suggested above the gun doesn't have much detail in it and would be better if it wasn't a black shape.

by kruifdesign » Mon Feb 12, 2018 6:34 pm

Update :

[attachment=38713:Death_Wish.jpg]

by Fidi » Sat Feb 10, 2018 8:54 am

I'd remove that flare arround Willis and mybe try to add the flare's color to the background instead of the white color.
Then maybe reduce the levels on Willis (if the image quality makes that possible) because there are many details getting lost I think (gun for example, it's only a black chuck at the moment ;) )

And whoat sauron said about the synopsis. I'd as well reduce the text a bit and add some quotes, ratings or even some more artwork instead. :)

by sauron » Sat Feb 10, 2018 12:55 am

Looks good but the synopsis is very large, this could be made smaller so you can add some quotes ?

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