Jigsaw (2017)

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by bazzah » Mon Sep 18, 2017 6:02 pm

Thank Speed, but I like the way the shadows are now. thank you to everyone for their help :)

Now in the gallery

by Speedz0r » Sun Sep 17, 2017 10:47 pm

Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Sep 17 2017, 08:39 PM) Thanks guys. And yes, it does make sense yoniweisberg. Is this better?

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I don't think it matters that much, since the TT isn't really part of the scene. So i think I'd rather go with the first shadow.

by bazzah » Sun Sep 17, 2017 7:39 pm

Thanks guys. And yes, it does make sense yoniweisberg. Is this better?

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by yoniweisberg » Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:30 am

This is looking really nice.

Just one slight detail is niggling me.

The chain you have on the right of the front, the shadow is cast to the left, and down - implying it's lit from the right and above, where as the TT seems to be lit from the centre, and below.

Does that make sense?

by Speedz0r » Sat Sep 16, 2017 6:45 pm

Looks brilliant to me, I really like that you turned the spine image and blu-ray logo into puzzle pieces as well, great work buddy!

by sauron » Sat Sep 16, 2017 6:43 pm

Looks good to me :)

by bazzah » Sat Sep 16, 2017 6:31 pm

I think this is now done :) I amended your suggestions, and also changed the blur screen cap. It didn't look right to me :p

Any more suggestions?

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by sauron » Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:43 pm

Come on Baz them legals look rubbish :lol: :lol: ;) I agree with what Speed has said, also maybe make the front background a little darker so it matches the back?

by Speedz0r » Sat Sep 16, 2017 1:16 pm

I really think that you should fix the legals, haha :giggle: just kidding :) . I think it looks better now, I really like that you added the face to the synopsis, hoping you'll close the wide spacing on line #2? The blood drop on the meat seems to be far too long for it to be blood (if it was slime then it could work). Also, instead of just having it kinda like a line, could you make it more as a droplet at the end?

by bazzah » Sat Sep 16, 2017 12:50 pm

Thanks guys. I have made some modifications. I haven't tried the actor names yet, but will see what it looks like. And ignore the legal area please :p

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