Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Out of the Shadows (revisited)

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by Speedz0r » Tue Sep 13, 2016 1:24 pm

Thanks guys! And thanks to everyone who helped me along the way :)

by bazzah » Tue Sep 13, 2016 10:15 am

Great job buddy, looks done to me :)

by sauron » Mon Sep 12, 2016 7:18 pm

No problem :) Looks done to me now

by Speedz0r » Mon Sep 12, 2016 6:53 pm

sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Sep 12 2016, 05:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is better, personally I'm not too keen on the green names as I feel it take the focus away from the whole synopsis. You also have a few spelling errors, I have rewritten it for you below :)

The Turtles continue to live in the shadows as no one knows they were the ones who took down Shredder. After super villain Shredder escapes custody, The Turtles now need to take him down again with help from their friends April O'Neil (Megan Fox), Vern Fenwick (Will Arnett) and the masked vigilante Casey Jones (Stephen Amell). Shredder joins forces with mad scientist Baxter Stockman (Tyler Perry) and the two henchmen, Bebop (Gary Anthony Williams) and Rocksteady (Stephen "Sheamus" Farrelly), to unleash a diabolical plan to take over the world. As the Turtles prepare to take on Shredder and his new crew, they find themselves facing an even greater evil with similar intentions: the notorious Krang.

Wow, that is too kind bro :) Big thank you! :cheers:

edit: Got rid of the green and kept all the text white. Replaced my synopsis with the typo-free one that sauron did. Is it done guys?
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by sauron » Mon Sep 12, 2016 5:31 pm

This is better, personally I'm not too keen on the green names as I feel it take the focus away from the whole synopsis. You also have a few spelling errors, I have rewritten it for you below :)

The Turtles continue to live in the shadows as no one knows they were the ones who took down Shredder. After super villain Shredder escapes custody, The Turtles now need to take him down again with help from their friends April O'Neil (Megan Fox), Vern Fenwick (Will Arnett) and the masked vigilante Casey Jones (Stephen Amell). Shredder joins forces with mad scientist Baxter Stockman (Tyler Perry) and the two henchmen, Bebop (Gary Anthony Williams) and Rocksteady (Stephen "Sheamus" Farrelly), to unleash a diabolical plan to take over the world. As the Turtles prepare to take on Shredder and his new crew, they find themselves facing an even greater evil with similar intentions: the notorious Krang.

by Speedz0r » Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:09 pm

Thanks, :)

by bazzah » Mon Sep 12, 2016 2:08 pm

This works :thumb:

by Speedz0r » Mon Sep 12, 2016 12:57 pm

Thanks Bazzah, but it is a bit small in order to fill up the space I have for the synopsis. I guess I could try a different font and changes the size a little, but this is what I got now. I've taken some pieces from here and there and also written a little myself. Definitely not the best synopsis, but I', hoping it will do the job. What do you guys think and also, should I keep the names green?
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by bazzah » Mon Sep 12, 2016 12:11 pm

You could use the official synopsis?

Your favorite pizza-loving turtles Michelangelo, Donatello, Leonardo and Raphael are back in the non-stop action adventure that is "fun from start to finish" (Brian Medina, Moviepilot.com). After super villain Shredder escapes custody, he joins with two mutant henchmen, Bebop and Rocksteady, to unleash a diabolical plan to take over the world. Now the brothers must team up with April O'Neil and their new, hockey-masked ally Casey Jones, to battle their enemies and face their biggest threat ever: the notorious Krang.

by Speedz0r » Mon Sep 12, 2016 10:25 am

Yeah, you're right. I haven't really found any synopsis that I like so far, for this movie, guess i gotta do some more research.

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