Daredevil S01

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by Paris » Sun Jul 26, 2015 5:52 pm

Try coloring the brick wall red. :)

by xshoty » Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:25 pm

Sorry m8 i skipped this one accidentaly, i think the light effect and TT look much better cant wait to see the next update ! :)

by sauron » Sun Jul 26, 2015 3:23 pm

TT looks better now :) but I still think there's too many splashes on him at the moment.

by Cirus » Thu Jul 09, 2015 4:30 pm

What about now?

[attachment=31332:daredevilupdate.jpg]

by Cirus » Thu Jul 09, 2015 11:26 am

Thanks for the suggestions. On my screen the front isn't so dark, and the bg is blured, but I'll try to modify a bit.
And you're right the TT is dark, I think the reason that I put under the adjustment layers.

by Paris » Thu Jul 09, 2015 8:16 am

Great! A couple of notes:

Color:
How would the TT look if it were brighter? I feel like te comp is already dark so a dark TT lessens the pop.
Besides the TT over the image nothing is popping, which can certainly work but only if the blues on daredevil are made more apparent and saturated but not too exaggerated.


Depth:
I feel like the image is reading very flat because the whole image is dark? Maybe try brightening and lowering the contrast of the background to show depth and atmospheric perspective? Also I think making te BG out of focus could also help?

by ctaulbee » Thu Jul 09, 2015 7:57 am

Nice start Cirus :)

by venome » Mon Jul 06, 2015 11:55 pm

Very cool imo :)

by sauron » Mon Jul 06, 2015 5:29 pm

I like it but think there's a bit too many splashes on him at the moment.

by Arkflip » Mon Jul 06, 2015 4:14 pm

Great start Cirus! Great light work. I think you should erase the water drop above his nose, see sample.

[attachment=31294:sample.png]

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