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by venome » Sat Nov 09, 2013 12:31 am

Looks good :)

by xshoty » Wed Nov 06, 2013 11:10 pm

Great one my friend :D

by pytlaczek » Wed Nov 06, 2013 9:06 pm

Do not give up the smoke. It's as easy things are, and you will be pleased with the result as you do this alone. ;)

by JollyRoger » Wed Nov 06, 2013 3:21 pm

I'd remove hyphenate from the synopsis. I don't like the words beingcut in half. :)

by Stalker » Wed Nov 06, 2013 12:59 pm

Almost done?

by Stalker » Tue Nov 05, 2013 2:15 am

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Nov 4 2013, 08:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't you need a quotation mark in the end of the quote? I know some newspapers don't give a shijt and print quotes with only the quotation mark in the begining.


Not necessarily. You probably refers to an element that, in newspaper design, is called "eye" (at least in Brazil, I am translating the exact term in our language.) To use or not two quotations marks is a matter of graphic design in this case, not grammar.
I let my students free to choose, so long as they respect their choice in the rest of the project (in caseof citations in the main text, the two quotation marks are mandatory)

by JollyRoger » Mon Nov 04, 2013 11:50 pm

Don't you need a quotation mark in the end of the quote? I know some newspapers don't give a shijt and print quotes with only the quotation mark in the begining.

by pytlaczek » Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:10 pm

Maybe if remove the smoke and make it from scratch alone would be much better. :chin: For example brushes.

Besides great! :thumb:

by JollyRoger » Mon Nov 04, 2013 6:54 pm

:thumb:

by Stalker » Mon Nov 04, 2013 6:50 pm

Another update

Still thinking about that plane crash in the front

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