by Skar » Wed May 15, 2013 10:47 pm
hard to say something without included is own approach... but for me the smoke is not that causing trouble, but i agree with JC about the wooden part, a little axe cut could be fine.
about back characters, not so sure, it's kind too empty over the synopsis and then or there's something needed to break that feeling of emptiness i have when looking at this part... or is is a too big synopsis and too little characters, i don't know somthing's disturbing... but i won't be able to do what you have done so far!!!

hard to say something without included is own approach... but for me the smoke is not that causing trouble, but i agree with JC about the wooden part, a little axe cut could be fine.
about back characters, not so sure, it's kind too empty over the synopsis and then or there's something needed to break that feeling of emptiness i have when looking at this part... or is is a too big synopsis and too little characters, i don't know somthing's disturbing... but i won't be able to do what you have done so far!!! ;)