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by JollyRoger » Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:52 pm

I think perhaps a green-tinted metal background would work better than the leather? I don't see the reference to the movie?

by chefjoe » Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:35 pm

yeah, i agree...


I'll fix prior to upload.

by JollyRoger » Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:29 am

I think the quotes on the front looked better up in the sky, bud

by Nightrider » Sun Sep 02, 2012 7:54 am

agree with JR this is one of your best joe :thumb:

by chefjoe » Sun Sep 02, 2012 2:46 am

Ok, not much room left now for re-arrangement...



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by Paris » Sun Sep 02, 2012 2:02 am

Looking better! For the legal area, how about adding a dark green transparent layer over the green leather? Also how would the legal text look as a greenish/yellow?

One more thing :lol2: I would try increasing the stills space by a lot. There isn't much happing in the top composition, so if you gave the stills a lot more space, you would have some more attention on the cool action shots!

by chefjoe » Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:56 am

how's this look...I too prefer this TT placement.


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by JollyRoger » Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:09 pm

I think I prefer the TT as you had it in post #20. :)

Back side is shaping to be your best work so far in my honest opinion! Really great to see you trying something out of your comfort zone! :thumb: Keep it up, bud! :)

On the backside, let the synopsis be aligned to the quote above, especially in the left side. Looks a little squished right now. :)

by chefjoe » Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:04 pm

This should do it, yeah...


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by wessim » Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:44 am

Maybe give the legal part some color

something like this, just an idea :)

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