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by Sxxo » Mon Apr 02, 2012 9:39 pm

Looks great Krabban

by Krabban » Sun Apr 01, 2012 9:33 am

M0vieM0nster wrote:
QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Apr 1 2012, 08:13 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't think 'Ryan Reynolds' needs to be so big at the top! A very very well done though for being soooooo creative with this :) I think you could tone down the glow from the phone too? At the mo for me it is distracting from the TT and i think the TT should be the main centre of attention. One other thing is that while i do love the TT, i can't help but ask myself... where is the light coming from? A Torch maybe? I can't remember the film well enough but there must be something you can add?


I have decreased the size of "Ryan Reynolds" and as you are saying - "tone down the light from the phone" to make the TT more eye-catching.

The light is just for bringing out details. But now when say it, he has a flashlight and a green snap light. I think I will add the flashlight together with the clock, the mobile and the zippo to fulfill everything. I think it will be to much objects if I add a flashlight with every light source.

I give it a try, but I have my vision. ;)

by M0vieM0nster » Sun Apr 01, 2012 7:13 am

I don't think 'Ryan Reynolds' needs to be so big at the top! A very very well done though for being soooooo creative with this :) I think you could tone down the glow from the phone too? At the mo for me it is distracting from the TT and i think the TT should be the main centre of attention. One other thing is that while i do love the TT, i can't help but ask myself... where is the light coming from? A Torch maybe? I can't remember the film well enough but there must be something you can add?

by Krabban » Sun Apr 01, 2012 6:56 am

I start to get really satisfied with this piece of work here.

I've darken it a little bit more, I also added more grunge and noise to get a more realistic feeling. I've put some light source on the spine logo to.

I can try to darken the legals just to see how it looks.

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by Paris » Sat Mar 31, 2012 10:27 pm

Darken The legal area maybe?

by venome » Sat Mar 31, 2012 9:32 pm

possibly worth a shot m8 yeah :)

by Krabban » Sat Mar 31, 2012 7:48 pm

What do think now? Maybe darken it little bit more so that the light gets sharper...?

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by Krabban » Sat Mar 31, 2012 7:32 pm

aah, I can see it now! Placed it under the wrong layers.

by JollyRoger » Sat Mar 31, 2012 6:21 pm

the image in post #23 looks better than the one you have now (post #32). It looks very over-saturated IMO.

by Krabban » Sat Mar 31, 2012 6:11 pm

Looks quite done to me. Nothing more to add as I can see now!

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