Machine Gun Preacher

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by elduderino » Mon Sep 19, 2016 3:09 am

Like it A Lot!
I actually think I like the image in post 24 (i think it was), just with the plain white, grey background. Really simplistic. It just pops. It also would then contrast with the back cover really well i think...
Great job!

by Paris » Tue Sep 13, 2016 3:18 pm

Top job!!

I suggest boosting the saturation on the colored text on the front and darkening it slightly. Also, how left arm is way too bright and seems like it's not attached to him? His left arm should be as dark as his right arm or his neck

by Speedz0r » Fri Sep 09, 2016 7:32 pm

What JR said. Altho i guess it's a texture you've used? So making them all the same size could take some time, I also feel they should be a tiny bit bigger.

by JollyRoger » Fri Sep 09, 2016 6:55 pm

A little less bullet holes, as suggested by Darren, and perhaps have them all at the same size? If the holes were made by the same machine gun, it would be logical if they all shared the same calibre. ;)

by sauron » Thu Sep 08, 2016 4:48 pm

I quite like it as it shows that a machine gun has been shot, plus the tagline on the front looks better now as well :)

by bazzah » Thu Sep 08, 2016 3:23 pm

Maybe there are too many bullet holes? How about having a bullet hole for each feature?

If you are getting tired of this one, leave it and start another. I always find it helps me to get more inspiration on the cover I am tiring of, if I come back to it later :)

by samppa » Thu Sep 08, 2016 1:39 pm

Added some bullet holes to the features area, but i'm not sure if it looks better. I'm starting to get really tired of this one :52:

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by Bozzy » Mon Mar 21, 2016 8:08 am

Great update!

by sauron » Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:47 pm

Looking really good! I personally don't mind the SF area how it is now but if you're not happy with it I look forward to seeing what you come up with :)

by JollyRoger » Thu Mar 17, 2016 6:25 pm

Excellent! Im loving the look of this! :yes:

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