Rise of the Planet of the Apes

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by Zungam » Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:11 am

I'm gonna keep the original spine picture for now. Might change it later on when more material are available. Also changed the quote, you're right nikerun, it did actually look a bit like the Star Wars Jedi font... Cover is now uploaded. Thanks everyone! :)

by Paris » Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:28 pm

Perhaps change the quote on the back, it seems too star wars themed.

by sauron » Thu Aug 18, 2011 10:04 pm

Nope this one doesn't work as well.

How about this one...

by Zungam » Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:53 pm

Well, I wanted a picture of an angry Caesar on the spine and couldn't find any others with that riot look. I did find another picture of him though. He's angry here to, but not riot mad... Does it work as well as the first picture?

by sauron » Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:24 pm

Hmmm I prefer the longer quote as it doesn't leave so much white space.

Have you tried a different image on the spine or you sticking with that one?

by Zungam » Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:09 pm

I've made a preview for you, felipe. Do you think this is better? Doesn't it look a bit empty up there?

I'm almost done now (Puh...). It's by far my longest WIP ever, but I feel it came out good. Thanks for all your help and comments, it's really appreciated :)

by felipe-11 » Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:58 pm

Looking great! I like the spine pic! I actually like all the 3 screen cap bars you had, any of them works nice IMO.
I'm not sure about that longer quote though, I would've just left it as it was. Other than that I don't really have anything to add!

by Nightrider » Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:50 pm

Yea sorry I see the spears now :)
Quote looks better to me now, and I like the screens too, probably a good idea from sauron about the spine pic.
Good stuff man! :)

by sauron » Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:57 pm

Looks much better now. But maybe have a different picture of caeser on the spine as you are already using that image on the back.

by Zungam » Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:54 am

Lowered the stills a bit so their heads show more. I've also added some white dividers and a picture of Caesar. The apes behind him is not from the bridge, they're from a roof top in the city. You can see the "spears" in their hands.

Since there's a lot going on on the top picture, I'm thinking the stills could be a bit more calmed down. Think I've found some nice pictures with a lot of feel in their facial expressions. I've dropped the long letters in the quote, and it looks better imo. Also added Caear on the spine, think he deserves that... ;)

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