Enemy Of The State

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by PierreF10 » Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:10 pm

Looks nice,only one thing, everything is centered except the names of the two actors have you tried putting their names just above the Tt and centering them, for me i think it would look better that way, i really like the mood of your front, nice going!!

by jcdesign » Sat Mar 12, 2011 9:10 pm

Smith and Hackman looks to dark for me. Can you try to give them some more light so they stands out more!

by brunell » Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:45 pm

Maladroit wrote:
QUOTE (Maladroit @ Mar 12 2011, 06:51 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
The names at the top look weird to me, I'd put "WILL SMITH" above the title on the left and "GENE HACKMAN" on the far right. And the tagline at the bottom, removing the "from the director." Leave the top empty.

That's just me though. :whistle:


I thought about what you said, but then I did the complete opposite. :P

Think this is the final layout for the front. I'm quite satisfied with it as it is now after the latest tweaks.

by Maladroit » Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:51 am

The names at the top look weird to me, I'd put "WILL SMITH" above the title on the left and "GENE HACKMAN" on the far right. And the tagline at the bottom, removing the "from the director." Leave the top empty.

That's just me though. :whistle:

by bpmford » Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:40 pm

Agreed brunell!

by brunell » Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:16 pm

Update. Removed the text block in the middle and changed a few things. Imo this feels cleaner & more "simplistic".

by bpmford » Wed Mar 02, 2011 1:16 am

I like this so far!

I'd recommend brightening it up tho. When it prints, some of the finer detail might be missed!

by JollyRoger » Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:09 pm

I'd move him away from the text block so that part of his head isn't cut off.

by brunell » Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:50 pm

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Mar 1 2011, 08:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Cool start. Are you planning to fix the top of Hackman?

You seem to like green/blue and black?


Fix the top of Hackman? How do you mean? :chin:

Heh, now that I think of it I've used blue & green "a bit", haven't I? :P

by M0vieM0nster » Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:12 pm

Me likes ;)

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