QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jan 16 2025, 01:23 PM)
Very nice work! I think you should brighten it up a little under Emily Cox's name, so it is clearer to read. The spine looks really good. I like the synopsis on fire. And I think what is bothering you about the features box is it is maybe the colour? Would it look better de-saturated?
Still playing around with the actor's names. This may not work - I can return to black text and brighten the background a little as you suggested, thanks.
For this update I went back to almost scratch and redid the burned ground and the fire, think it's better? What do you guys think?
QUOTE (stampe @ Jan 16 2025, 02:26 PM)
Looks great buddy
special features in two columns that are left aligned inside a box always looks strange to me, so i usually end up handling it like a text block and center align it.
you can separate them by a dot, dash or a lil Viking shield
as for the color. honestly, id go with the map color instead of the orange from your title. it would also make the fire stand out more and maybe change the legal text beneath it, in a light brown color like part of the map too. if you like the yellow/orange, by all means keep it
I'll return to the back later, and work on the box plus have another look at text colour, thanks