Dont close it Chef, you have a solid start here.
But, you need to slow down and take some time, you have lots of cool imagery to play with here and some good idea's.
Sorry for my curt response earlier, it really didn't come out as I intended it too (just re-read it again sorry :( I was in a rush and wasn't concentrating).
To be more constructive, the texture you've chosen in the background is very los res, so perhaps I can help there if you can't find anything. The titel treatment for "Army of Darkness is nice but lacks depth, try paining in some highlights and shadows and position the "evil dead" bit above it, in one line, that should keep you busy for 5 minutes (IMG:http://www.hirescovers.net/forum/style_emoticons/default/8834.gif
) then we can see how it's comming along.