Looks good Lulubelle. I haven't seen the movie, but is the "lady" supposed to be in/coming out of a pool?
If so, why not add some pool tiles like you would see on the bottom of a pool. You know, like the small blue ceramic tiles you see in almost every pool. Just a thought. (IMG:http://www.hirescovers.net/forum/style_emoticons/default/chin.gif
The key to faking out the parents is the clammy hands. It's a good non-specific symptom; I'm a big believer in it. A lot of people will tell you that a good phony fever is a dead lock, but, uh... you get a nervous mother, you could wind up in a doctor's office. That's worse than school. You fake a stomach cramp, and when you're bent over, moaning and wailing, you lick your palms. It's a little childish and stupid, but then, so is high school.